Punctuation Activity

This week we had to do a Dictogloss it was not hard once we were finished we had to do a Punctuation Activity and here it is

 

Dictogloss

Cultures are what make countries unique . Each country has different culture activities, cultural rituals. Culture is seen in people writing, religion, music, clothes, cooking and what they do. In some cultures like China you are only to have one kid. In China  you most want a boy because there are strong.  

Different countries  have different cultures.For example, some order Japanese   people were kimonos , like flower arranging vases and have tea

ceremonies .

My family is from Auckland , New Zealand. We mostly  eat  seafood. Did you know when it is a special welcome the Maori people  do a powhiri and a haka. 

                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

The 3 little pigs

Unedited there was once a family of pigs the mother pig was very poor one day she sent her three little pigs out to find some gold the first that went off met a man with a bundle of straw and said to him Please man give me that straw to build me a house  the man did and the little pig built a house with it suddenly there came along a wolf and knocked at the door and said little pig little pig let me come in the pig answered no no by the hair of my chiny chin chin the wolf then answered to that then ill huff and ill puff and i’ll blow your house in

Edited There was once a family of Pigs.  The Mother Pig was very poor one day she sent her three little Pigs out to find some gold . The first that went off met a man with a bundle of straw.  And said to him “ Please man give me that straw to build me a house “ the man did and the little pig built a house with it. Suddenly there came along a wolf and knocked at the door.  And said “little pig little pig let me come in “ the pig answered “no no by the hair of my chiny chin chin”.  The wolf then answered ” to that then ill huff and ill puff and i’ll blow your house in”.

Waimaria the high bar

The High Bar

she takes a deep breath, swing off the box, hang  in mid air, flick  straight legs forward and up , pull the upper body onto the bar.

It  hates me                                                           It is  a dark demon She thinks it hates her but it does not . She thinks the high bar is a dark demon it just stares at me .

100%.  You can do it give it 100% !!

Good - Positive Bad - Negative It can make you fit when you do gymnastics. . You break bones   when you do gymnastics. 10/10 Reason:  Because it has so much  personification

Commonwealth Games Punctuation

“Go “yelled Dad he was yelling at the tv while watching the boxing during the commonwealth games. Dad was watching very intensely . David Nyika looked strong. Boom his opponent was knocked to the ground hooray we all shouted “David won gold and he is a champion” “wow “I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.

Cyber smart

My weekly reflection

Waimaria World War One

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World War 1 began on July 28, 1914 and lasted until November 11, 1918. Mr But and Mrs Flavell’s granddads were apart of the world war one. The world war one was 100 years ago. Many flags today, will be flown at half mast. .

Reading high bar

The human or living characteristics of the high bar,  gravity, her legs.	Page	Copy the sentences from the story here.
personification	17	“It wants to kill me”
personification	17	“The  high bar is a dark demon”
simile	18	“It like a dog”
personification	19	“ kia ora “

Object	Write your sentences below.
a netball or rugby ball being passed to you.	“ The netball loves me”
a kayak	“ The Kayak hates me”
your netbook	“ My netbook is so slow”
your shoes	“ My shoes is so beautiful”

Object	Write your sentences below.
the grass	Grass  is as spiky  like the green cactus
a kayak	The Kayak is as slow as a tuttle
a pair of scissors	The scissors is as sharp as a lion  teeth
a pie	The pie is as hot as a oven

Waimaria A-z commonwealth games

Top town or top schools

Wow! Do you know it was our first time doing top town. It was so hard because you could not touch the gourd .If you did you will get eating by the fish

World war one

World War 1 began on July 28, 1914 and lasted until November 11, 1918. Mr But and Mrs Flavell’s granddads were apart of the world war one. The world war one was 100 years ago. Many flags today, will be flown at half mast. .

The commonwealth games dictagloss

The commonwealth games ,  often known as the friendly games, it has a unique place sporting history. It is an international multi -sport, it is like the olympics  games   except athletes from the commonwealth countries. The commonwealth games includes county like New Zealand, England and the Pacific Island.

The first commonwealth game was held in Hamilton , Canada. Eleven countries sent four hundred, athletes and six sports along with  fifty nine events.  Since then the games have been held every four years.  However in 1942 and 1946 the games were cancelled , because of the second world war .

The event has many chargers, even it’s name. In 1930 to 1950  the games, were known as the British games. Later, from  1970  to  1974 took the title of the British commonwealth games. Finally , at the 1978 in Edmonton Canada,  this multi sport event changed its name to the commonwealth games.