What the is the story about granddad medals? By Waimaria

This is a story about Granddad’s medals.

I love my Granddad.We have lots of fun together.We  go swimming and fishing down at the wharf.My Grandad is teaching me how to tie a proper fisherman’s knot.He has an old tin box full  of hooks and sinkers fishing  things.It smells like the sea, and looks like pirates’ treasure.

GRANDDAD HAS  A big jar of peppermints by his bed.He gives me same to put in my pockets.We  go for big walks in the park and, when the wind blows just right we fly kites.